During the reading of a guilty verdict…

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It was as if he was dealt the death card,
the man’s eyes grew hard,
he stood up abruptly,
knocking over his chair,
mind filled with fear,
his life unraveled
as the judge slammed down the gavel,
wanting order in his court,
he saw the jurors out of the corner
of his eye,
they made a big slip,
and he wanted to say more,
but he just bit his lip,
and the guilty verdict remained on the floor,
the judge rasped,
then gasped,
maintaining control as best as he could,
the jurors were out so long,
that wasn’t good,
because the verdict rendered was just wrong.

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  • Hiro on Jun 4, 2009

    I like this one frank it was simple to read

  • Hiro on Jun 4, 2009

    I like this one frank it was simple to read

  • Evelyn M Carter on Jun 4, 2009

    Liked this one a lot Frank. Your writing subjects are so different than mine ~ you go so deep. I enjoyed this read though, thanks for sharing

  • Sammy2000 on Jun 4, 2009

    very good one frank

  • Caplain on Jun 4, 2009

    interesting piece of writing

  • RS Wing on Jun 5, 2009

    another great piece frank….sheds light on the realities of justice….there aint none! nice work bro

  • Riano on Jun 5, 2009

    i liked it 4 you

  • sarai32 on Jun 8, 2009

    Wow this gave you a good feeling great depth loved it

  • Jaystone on Jun 9, 2009

    gave a good feeling? how? I agree with wing no justice!

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