Eyes Opened Underwater

carissimi on Aug 4, 2010

Tags: carissimi, ocean, secrets, treasures, UNDERWATER

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Esmeralda project..

eyes opened underwater

and just looking and knowing

the treasures and the secrets

that only the water holds

and only the water can bring

holding the breath

under the water

not out of fear

but out of respect

and knowing that by holding

only then will

the true treasures

and secrets

begin to surface

and fill you within

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Comments (13)

Likha on Aug 5, 2010
Are you a diver or something? Your first poem was also about water. I now realize it can be a rich resource for poems. Good one.
Likha on Aug 5, 2010
My mistake, it was another author. Sorry. My hands are full of fine reads. Still like your poem.
PARAM on Aug 5, 2010
Nice poem.
wonder on Aug 5, 2010
A lot of meaning can be derived from this. Nice.
Christine Ramsay on Aug 5, 2010
A very well expressed piece.

Christine
Francois Hagnere on Aug 5, 2010
Beautiful. Nautre has so much to offer, man must respect Her.
Thank you for this poem.
Raj the Tora on Aug 5, 2010
good one indeed
gaby7 on Aug 5, 2010
I liked this!
Ethics0006 on Aug 5, 2010
Great Write
heidiefernandez on Aug 5, 2010
liked this one…
Yalonda on Aug 5, 2010
I love this! It paints such a beautiful image in my mind!
Dreamescape on Aug 5, 2010
I can’t swim…but nice poem
1hopefulman on Sep 13, 2010
Love to do some diving some day. So much to discover.

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