Some facts on life!

To fight back you need to fight.
To come back you need to leave.
To have joy you need to enjoy.
To win you need to attempt.
To succeed you need to try.
To achieve you need to gain.
To rule you need to fool.
To fool you need to be cool.

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  • Debra. on Dec 4, 2008

    Good flow,Joystick.

  • Westbrook on Dec 4, 2008

    It rhymes well.

  • BoJack454@Triond on Dec 4, 2008

    Funny and so true too

  • Morgana on Dec 4, 2008

    You are absolutely right!

  • Darla Smith on Dec 4, 2008

    Very inspiring.

  • Dialga on Dec 4, 2008

    A very true poem.

  • James DeVere on Dec 4, 2008

    Succinct – write on!

  • Inna Tysoe on Dec 5, 2008

    Yes.

    Inna

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Dec 5, 2008

    It’s true! Take care!

  • goodselfme on Dec 5, 2008

    Great words for meditation.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jan 12, 2009

    Interesting piece*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

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