nice, a little troubling, but nice

their is life in your writings, unlike most peoples

I fear for you and your emotional and psychological well being.. As a poet I listen to what is said as well as what isn’t said and there is some disturbing and disconcerting content here and in some of your other work.

Would you be open to dialoging with me about ways to address these?

you have a skill my friend

I like this, it is emotional and heartfelt, but it speaks volumes. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

This is a very impressive poem. The style of the poem is crystal-clear. Some people are very difficult to please-it is a universal truth.

Heartfelt poem!

It is good to say the things with poem. Keep writing.

very good

….Well wirtten. But if it touches reality, build yourself an invisable shield.

………written…sorry……

I like the way you expressed your emotions, I feel one should only please the most important people in life you can’t please the world also people often see the weakness in you not your strengths

something in this poem

Its a well crafted article if a little confusing for me. Take care. LB

Sorry I meant poem. LB

Pleaseing others can make anyone go crazy! You really have to find your own voice and soul in your work and to hell with what people say. There are always going to be people that don’t agree with what you say or do. But the question that I have is why does it affect you so much? I would tell them or who ever is bugging you to… up yours and move on?

The best thing one can learn best is to please ones’ self before anyone else… If writing is your way to please your own self, keep it up. Writing is an art and you can weave it the way you please…

I hope you can find somebody who sees all that is good and successful about you. That is what you need to hear and it is what they should be talking to you about.