No more pretending.

I don’t want to put on that fake smile

The one that comes out when others are near

Life is too hard to keep pretending

I won’t do it anymore

From a young age we are taught

To look happy and be good

To be seen and not heard

To put on that fake smile

With age comes knowledge,

Power and wisdom

Well now I am wise

Powerful and know enough

Not to pretend anymore

My fake smile is tucked away

Locked in a place

No one will see it again

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  • Ukrainian on Nov 17, 2010

    Nice, genuine.

  • Heenotheducky on Nov 17, 2010

    A lot of meaning hidden between each word.

  • iamyna410 on Nov 17, 2010

    Nice work, I can relate to it.

  • SimplyShash on Nov 17, 2010

    Liked the share. Thanks

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Nov 18, 2010

    Nice one, Nina.

  • clandestinef on Nov 18, 2010

    Great work. Thanks for sharing this one…

  • Jessie Will on Nov 18, 2010

    Good one, excellent topic and excellent write. Modern society teaches us to be “nice”, and behave appropriately – fake smile is just one attribute.

  • fagina on Nov 18, 2010

    Good one..Was reminded of Gabriel Okara’s “Once upon a time”… If you have’nt read this poem, please read it..it has an excellent way of portraying hypocrisy..

  • fagina on Nov 18, 2010

    Good one..Was reminded of Gabriel Okara\’s \”Once upon a time\”… If you have\’nt read this poem, please read it..it has an excellent way of portraying hypocrisy..

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 18, 2010

    Hopefully the fake smile has been replaced with a true smile. A very well expressed poem.

    Christine

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 18, 2010

    I hope you are now able to replace the fake smile with a true smile. A well expressed piece.

    Christine

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 18, 2010

    A great resolution.

  • Nina Mason on Nov 20, 2010

    Thank you!
    I am still a work in progress but I really am trying to be loyal to myself.

  • Nina Mason on Dec 16, 2010

    fagina, I finally remember to read the poem. It is beautiful and sad. I had never seen it before.
    It is just exactly what I was expressing here. Thank you for sharing it with me.
    Below I will share it with everyone.

  • Nina Mason on Dec 16, 2010

    Once Upon a Time
    By GABRIEL OKARA a Nigerian Poet

    Once upon a time, son,
    they used to laugh with their hearts
    and laugh with their eyes:
    but now they only laugh with their teeth,
    while their ice-block-cold eyes
    search behind my shadow.

    There was a time indeed
    they used to shake hands with their hearts:
    but that’s gone, son.
    Now they shake hands without hearts:
    while their left hands search
    my empty pockets.

    ‘Feel at home’! ‘Come again’:
    they say, and when I come
    again and feel
    at home, once, twice,
    there will be no thrice –
    for then I find doors shut on me.

    So I have learned many things, son.
    I have learned to wear many faces
    like dresses – homeface,
    officeface, streetface, hostface,
    cocktailface, with all their conforming smiles
    like a fixed portrait smile.
    And I have learned too
    to laugh with only my teeth
    and shake hands without my heart.
    I have also learned to say, ‘Goodbye’,
    when I mean ‘Good-riddance’;
    to say ‘Glad to meet you’,
    without being glad; and to say ‘It’s been
    nice talking to you’, after being bored.

    But believe me, son.
    I want to be what I used to be
    when I was like you. I want
    to unlearn all these muting things.
    Most of all, I want to relearn
    how to laugh, for my laugh in the mirror
    shows only my teeth like a snake’s bare fangs!

    So show me, son,
    how to laugh; show me how
    I used to laugh and smile
    once upon a time when I was like you.

    [thanks again fagina]

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