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Fall, I fell so hard my bones shattered
I bleed so much I couldn’t catch my breath
My Life went by My dreams were lost
This is what happens when you give up

Nothing is worse than falling
because no can hear you, you’re blocked out
Your that shadow no one cares about
To fall is like slow motion
You see what could have been and what will happen

Fall, I fell so soft I felt guilty
I knew people still would hate me
My friends were gone, relationships failed
I lost my way and suffered
I gave up

Fall, I fell so fast I lost my grip
the speed I was falling at was unstoppable
Everything went blurry I was blind
I didn’t see what I had done what was real

Fall, I wish I hadn’t
Fall, I’m glad I did
I haven fallen and I must do something now

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  • Steven West on Aug 22, 2009

    Very emotional and vivid poem.

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