Fall for Me

Liane Schmidt on Sep 9, 2008

Tags: beautiful, fall, flying, free, glow, heart, heaven, joy, love, night, romance, romantic, smile, special, Stay, true, true love

Fall with everything in your heart, completely.

I am flying free on the wings
You drew
On the leftovers, you forgot
To take with you

I’m wishing you were by my side
I’m remembering the joy in your voice
The glow of your beautiful smile
When you turned and disappeared
I wondered when and if

I would ever see you again
It was so easy for you to turn away
Like our night
Was just another day
Nothing special, nothing new
While my heart silently
Pleaded for you to stay
Wishing only for you

How could my heaven with you
Be something so simple and
So second thought
Something tomorrow, you easily outgrew?

Now, all I can do

Is just hope and pray completely
That somehow my heart believed true
That you fell for me that night
As I, fell for you…

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MC on Sep 9, 2008
great,,,
swapna on Sep 9, 2008
excellent…..
Heart Stone on Sep 9, 2008
A poetry of longings, awesome.
Andri on Sep 9, 2008
how sweet is that

andri
Kim Buck on Sep 9, 2008
I am right with you.
maryspaul on Sep 9, 2008
Very nice and sweet!

Take Care and God bless…

maryspaul
Will Gray on Sep 9, 2008
Beautiful. Excellent wording that inspires emotion so easily. Great poem.
claris on Sep 9, 2008
nice article
CHAN LEE PENG on Sep 9, 2008
Impressive poem!
Christy Tuller on Sep 9, 2008
Wonderful poem! So much emotion!
Judy Sheldon on Sep 9, 2008
Makes one want to say, “if he didn’t, he’s crazy!”

Take care & God bless.
nobert bermosa on Sep 9, 2008
So lovely,so really good to be in love,
B Nelson on Sep 10, 2008
The poem was great and the photo choice was terrific too!
Good work!
valli on Sep 10, 2008
Nice one.
LP Jardine on Sep 10, 2008
Excellent heartfelt poem
ranjeev on Sep 11, 2008
realy nice,.but i lost my love today:(,.n im loss also,.im missing her:(,.
Anne Lyken-Garner on Sep 12, 2008
A sweet but sad poem. Well done.
Lauren Axelrod on Sep 12, 2008
Truly emotional. The twists and turns of love can leave us perplexed. I love this
Zhang on Sep 14, 2008
A great poem. To quote McDonald’s “I’m loving it”.
LP Jardine on Sep 16, 2008
Strange how lost love lends itself to great poetry.
Lois on Sep 18, 2008
whoa..what a nice poem..i can feel the emotion..

i hope i could write one as good as this..

take care..
jo oliver on Sep 18, 2008
Great poem sad but with very sweet undertones.
Ira Hayes on Sep 21, 2008
Good – I’ve felt this way.
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Sep 23, 2008
Wonderful… hope I could write poems as touching as yours.
mdegenhardt on Sep 23, 2008
Your thoughts and emotions are expressed with so much clarity and fluidity. The read is terrific though sad because of the subject matter. I sure hope he does, for his sake anyway. Very well written. Michael
gabbic1219 on Sep 24, 2008
wow….very nice ,sweet words with much pain!
it is so deep w/ emotion and expressed so well!
Darlene McFarlane on Sep 29, 2008
How sweet it is. Written with real feeling. The emotions you express are clearly felt by the reader…every painful word.

I enjoyed reading this one so much I had to read it a second time.

Great work, Liane
Winged Lead on Oct 1, 2008
Liane, The poem is pure artistry.You can quote me on that.
tony haynes on Oct 26, 2008
These are the lines that drew me in and stood out significantly.

“I am flying free on the wings
You drew
On the leftovers, you forgot
To take with you”

now that’s poetry

tony h
Kate Smedley on Feb 4, 2009
This is beautiful poetry.
trishia on Feb 4, 2009
I was captivated by this lovely and romantic write! You are indeed talented-offering such unique expressions of love.
OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009
You are a great poetry writer, I enjoy reading your lovely works. Keep ‘em coming and I’ll keep reading.
Ella Currence on Feb 13, 2009
Nice poem
Carolyn Ann Aish on Mar 2, 2009
Thought-provoking and whimsical with unanswered questions and things not as perceived…
Gerlaine on Mar 3, 2009
This poem reminds me of what it was like when I was single wanting to be loved. Thanks for the walk.
Blessing Boston on Apr 23, 2009
It is amazing, the gift you have been given..Ask the Lord, if he is the one He has given you….and/ if so, stand in faith, no matter how long!! I’m standing with you if so!! God Bless you.

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