Fall Through The Siren

ShadowPsychos on May 3, 2010

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Come to the call of the siren

can you hear its maddening scream?

wailing in the delights of death

synthetic orchards opening

to a dusky bloom

Beckoning to you to follow

you can not hold your presence from such fate

from the noose that hangs

there in your darkest dreams

the floor beneath you caves right in

your feet now rest way down

upon the sickening heat of Hell

can you smell the singed edges

that are eating away your soul?

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Lady Sunshine on May 3, 2010
Hellish imagery.
ken bultman on May 3, 2010
Is it too dark in here or is it just me?
Jimmy Shilaho on May 3, 2010
Scaring but nice all the same.
jimbob1 on May 3, 2010
SP…as a former career fire fighter, this brought back some terrifying memories of times when I was in burning buildings and I was beginning to smell the singed edges from that sickening heat…sounds like you have been there…at least you captured that power…ILI…Thank you
Vikram Chhabra on May 3, 2010
A very dark piece. Kept me enthralled…:)
giftarist on May 3, 2010
Chills.
VTech on May 3, 2010
Good Post.
rizzei on May 4, 2010
the thoughts are well written. great post

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