Another song from 2008! (c) Lacrimosaangel.

Have I lost the only thing that lit the candle in my heart
Have I missed the best days, the ones which made me smile
Is this darkness deep inside of me been opened up forever
or have I lost my mind again

I feel like I’m falling
(I can’t stop thinking of you)
I don’t know who I am
(Can’t stop feeling for you)
Without you here, I’m all alone
Falling in love with the dark

Lost inside the never-ending, where did I go wrong
Embraced by the cold why did everything dissolve
In the terror that become my dreams
am I losing my mind again?

Won’t stop falling
(Why can’t I stop thinking of you)
Who the hell am I
(If I can’t feel a thing)
Now you’re not here, I’m still alone
falling in love with the dark

And when there’s nothing left but the empty dark
Who’s left to hold the candle inside my heart
When there’s nowhere left to fall
where will I turn, where do I go?

Won’t stop feeling like I’m falling,
Falling in love with the dark
It’s dragging me under, I’m losing my mind
Still all alone, with memories of you

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Comments (8)
  • A Bromley on Feb 26, 2011

    OH! Very sad but an extremely well written poem. I like it. Good job.

  • quiet voice on Feb 26, 2011

    Hi, pieces of this could be a song. Well done.

  • carolinad on Feb 27, 2011

    Great read; thanks!

  • Lynn Hollis on Feb 27, 2011

    Nicely written lyrics. The person in the song sounds sad and heartbroken and afraid of being alone.

  • lian rosa on Feb 28, 2011

    Yeah you can make a song out of it. ^_^

  • Dafeenah on Feb 28, 2011

    So sad. Great job

  • Mileena R. on Mar 3, 2011

    I would love to hear this put into a song with beautiful music… It would match my mood…

  • adicodrean1967 on Mar 8, 2011

    good post

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