The moment you finally knew.

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It was during one quiet walk
I remembered the peaceful rhythm
The intimacy of our talk

It was after a pleasant cup of tea
You took my hand, fingers interlaced
And the warmth of your touch invigorated me

It was the morning I woke in the comfort of your arms
The world outside had curiously disappeared
Except the memory of your playful charms

It was the moment I suddenly knew
When my heart stopped and finally realized,
I was, falling in love with you

Joie Schmidt © Copyright 2010 All Rights Reserved.

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  • Alicia Wind on Feb 13, 2009

    awww—lovely piece—way to realized of falling in love!

  • Morgana on Feb 13, 2009

    Yes, lovely, warm and sweet. :-)

  • papaleng on Feb 13, 2009

    Oh! this is so cute and romantic Lianne..

  • hfj on Feb 13, 2009

    Very nice and so well written. Well done.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 13, 2009

    lovely soothing words how i wish i were u
    lh

  • OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009

    Love, this if beautiful and very romantic, just in time for Valentine.

    Happy Love Day

    OhSugar

  • stephencardiff on Feb 13, 2009

    nice way to capture a mood well done

  • Blue Buttefly on Feb 13, 2009

    Flawless!

  • payge on Feb 13, 2009

    A very romantic poem to read and a beautiful write.I loved it and perfect for Valentines Day.

  • Poetic Enigma on Feb 13, 2009

    This is an absolutely beautiful poem
    so fantastically written (:

  • seashell66 on Feb 13, 2009

    Very warm and beautiful. It is the little things that are the big things.

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 13, 2009

    Beautiful, what a joy you are to read. Thank you and God bless.

  • Abdul Sabour Ayoubi on Feb 13, 2009

    Wow, it is so beautiful that it left speechless, and I can’t find a perfect word to decribe it. It reminded me of my best times. I thank you for using the words my heart wanted to hear.
    Keep written and Happy Valentines Day.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 13, 2009

    that’s so sweet and lovely as always

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 13, 2009

    Another lovely work of art.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Feb 13, 2009

    Yes. Very quiet, very lovely.

  • Ella Currence on Feb 13, 2009

    Once again you did it again how nice. I really like it

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 13, 2009

    Another great piece of yours. :-)

  • S Air on Feb 13, 2009

    This is just lovely! Very romantic.

  • trishia on Feb 13, 2009

    A soft,and lovely expression of falling in love. Great as usual!

  • Judy Sheldon on Feb 13, 2009

    Inspiring. Thanks so much for sharing.

    Take care, G♥d bless & Happy Valentine’s day!

  • rutherfranc on Feb 13, 2009

    you sounded very at peace with yourself when you realized you loved him.. guess it`s true love!

  • Reilley on Feb 13, 2009

    Simply lovely.

  • Dee Gold on Feb 13, 2009

    Oh,how romantic

  • Unofre Pili on Feb 13, 2009

    Romantic sweet. Nice piece as usual.

  • Carolyn Ann Aish on Feb 14, 2009

    Perfect for VALENTINES DAY!! well done. I love it!

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 14, 2009

    Very romantic.

    Inna

  • Maria Blazz on Feb 14, 2009

    Happy Valentine’s day!

  • Linda Lori on Feb 14, 2009

    Perfectly romantic!

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 14, 2009

    That was so beautiful and poignant. I loved it.

    Christine

  • Anne Lyken Garner on Feb 14, 2009

    Sweet thoughts for Valentine’s Day

  • choobin on Feb 14, 2009

    Directly express of feeling of someone in love.

  • Lostash on Feb 14, 2009

    It IS perfect for Valentines Day!!

  • Moses Ingram on Feb 14, 2009

    Perfect for Vallentines Day. Thanks for sharing.

  • Susan B Anna on Feb 14, 2009

    Very sweet piece, as usual…

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 14, 2009

    Incredible as always!

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 14, 2009

    Nicely done. Well spoken…simple, yet powerful and to the “heart” of the matter. Wonderful voice.

    AC

  • macon on Feb 15, 2009

    as always.. your poems are always captivating. so sweet!

  • Debra. on Feb 15, 2009

    Beautiful poem as always, Liane.

  • FOREVER POETRY on Feb 15, 2009

    A VERY GOOD EXAMPLE OF THE COURSE OF EVENTS THAT LEAD US TO LOVE

  • CA Johnson on Feb 15, 2009

    This is a great poem about falling in love.

  • MMV Abad on Feb 15, 2009

    I love the two last lines the most :)

  • ivor Ogidefa on Feb 16, 2009

    nice one here, thanks a million for sharing

  • Joshua Miguel on Feb 16, 2009

    makes me fall in love again. nice work. : )

  • denus on Feb 17, 2009

    beautiful poem.

  • Majic on Feb 18, 2009

    That’s just lovely!
    Makes me want to ask her out again!

  • mradil on Feb 22, 2009

    now what can i say..its beautiful

  • livemike on Feb 23, 2009

    Lovely words..

  • Vikram Chhabra on Mar 1, 2009

    Catches the innocence of love. Good job!!

  • Tate Morgan on Mar 4, 2009

    Beautiful

  • Papa Sparks on Mar 4, 2009

    Very beautiful and moving. You are a very good writer and it is an honor to read your literary stylings.

  • Lisa Medd on Mar 5, 2009

    You are an inspiration!! such great writing!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 10, 2009

    it really brings the feeling alive!

  • Colleen Ranney on Mar 23, 2009

    Cupid must have been hiding out somewhere just smiling. This is heartwarming. I love lovers. Great poem

  • Eric A. Rinald on Oct 26, 2010

    That’s really nice.

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