The moment you finally knew.

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It was during one quiet walk
I remembered the peaceful rhythm
The intimacy of our talk

It was after a pleasant cup of tea
You took my hand, fingers interlaced
And the warmth of your touch invigorated me

It was the morning I woke in the comfort of your arms
The world outside had curiously disappeared
Except the memory of your playful charms

It was the moment I suddenly knew
When my heart stopped and finally realized,
I was, falling in love with you

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  • Mys Lyke Meeh on Feb 13, 2009

    awww—lovely piece—way to realized of falling in love!

  • Morgana on Feb 13, 2009

    Yes, lovely, warm and sweet. :-)

  • papaleng on Feb 13, 2009

    Oh! this is so cute and romantic Lianne..

  • hfj on Feb 13, 2009

    Very nice and so well written. Well done.

  • sexyme on Feb 13, 2009

    lovely soothing words how i wish i were u
    lh

  • OhSugar on Feb 13, 2009

    Love, this if beautiful and very romantic, just in time for Valentine.

    Happy Love Day

    OhSugar

  • stephencardiff on Feb 13, 2009

    nice way to capture a mood well done

  • MJPatrick on Feb 13, 2009

    Flawless!

  • payge on Feb 13, 2009

    A very romantic poem to read and a beautiful write.I loved it and perfect for Valentines Day.

  • cole justify on Feb 13, 2009

    Innocently sweet and warmly cute. Have a great Valentines day , Liane

    God Bless you and yours…..

  • Catelin Hoover on Feb 13, 2009

    Liane
    Another wonderful poem. This gives that nice warm “I’m in love again” feeling. The picture is so nice. Ths gent you are in love with…I sure hope he loves you just as much!

  • Poetic Enigma on Feb 13, 2009

    This is an absolutely beautiful poem
    so fantastically written (:

  • seashell66 on Feb 13, 2009

    Very warm and beautiful. It is the little things that are the big things.

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 13, 2009

    Beautiful, what a joy you are to read. Thank you and God bless.

  • Abdul Sabour Ayoubi on Feb 13, 2009

    Wow, it is so beautiful that it left speechless, and I can’t find a perfect word to decribe it. It reminded me of my best times. I thank you for using the words my heart wanted to hear.
    Keep written and Happy Valentines Day.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 13, 2009

    that’s so sweet and lovely as always

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 13, 2009

    Another lovely work of art.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Feb 13, 2009

    Yes. Very quiet, very lovely.

  • Ella Currence on Feb 13, 2009

    Once again you did it again how nice. I really like it

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 13, 2009

    Another great piece of yours. :-)

  • S Air on Feb 13, 2009

    This is just lovely! Very romantic.

  • Sarah Elizabeth Hume on Feb 13, 2009

    awww liane hunny, the pic is lovely as well as the piece, it is peaceful and heavenly just like you angel:)…

  • trishia on Feb 13, 2009

    A soft,and lovely expression of falling in love. Great as usual!

  • Judy Sheldon on Feb 13, 2009

    Inspiring. Thanks so much for sharing.

    Take care, G♥d bless & Happy Valentine’s day!

  • rutherfranc on Feb 13, 2009

    you sounded very at peace with yourself when you realized you loved him.. guess it`s true love!

  • Reilley on Feb 13, 2009

    Simply lovely.

  • Dee Gold on Feb 13, 2009

    Oh,how romantic

  • Unofre Pili on Feb 13, 2009

    Romantic sweet. Nice piece as usual.

  • Carolyn Ann Aish on Feb 14, 2009

    Perfect for VALENTINES DAY!! well done. I love it!

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 14, 2009

    Very romantic.

    Inna

  • Maria Blazz on Feb 14, 2009

    Happy Valentine’s day!

  • Linda Lori on Feb 14, 2009

    Perfectly romantic!

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 14, 2009

    That was so beautiful and poignant. I loved it.

    Christine

  • Anne Lyken Garner on Feb 14, 2009

    Sweet thoughts for Valentine’s Day

  • choobin on Feb 14, 2009

    Directly express of feeling of someone in love.

  • Lostash on Feb 14, 2009

    It IS perfect for Valentines Day!!

  • Moses Ingram on Feb 14, 2009

    Perfect for Vallentines Day. Thanks for sharing.

  • Susan B Anna on Feb 14, 2009

    Very sweet piece, as usual…

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 14, 2009

    Incredible as always!

  • NA Staffieri on Feb 14, 2009

    This one should be put to music. What a great love song it would make. Thanks, Liane.

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 14, 2009

    Nicely done. Well spoken…simple, yet powerful and to the “heart” of the matter. Wonderful voice.

    AC

  • macon on Feb 15, 2009

    as always.. your poems are always captivating. so sweet!

  • Debra. on Feb 15, 2009

    Beautiful poem as always, Liane.

  • FOREVER POETRY on Feb 15, 2009

    A VERY GOOD EXAMPLE OF THE COURSE OF EVENTS THAT LEAD US TO LOVE

  • CA Johnson on Feb 15, 2009

    This is a great poem about falling in love.

  • MMV Abad on Feb 15, 2009

    I love the two last lines the most :)

  • ivor Ogidefa on Feb 16, 2009

    nice one here, thanks a million for sharing

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 16, 2009

    Another beautiful poem as always, thank you Lianne.

  • Michelle Parker on Feb 16, 2009

    Dear Liane,
    A beautiful poem of new love.
    Much blessings.
    Love Shelley.
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • Joshua Miguel on Feb 16, 2009

    makes me fall in love again. nice work. : )

  • Sandra Tapia on Feb 17, 2009

    It’s writing like this that keeps a love of twenty years thriving. You help stimulate all those feelings that keep me falling in love with my husband again and again! You have such an inner beauty Liane.

  • denus on Feb 17, 2009

    beautiful poem.

  • Majic on Feb 18, 2009

    That’s just lovely!
    Makes me want to ask her out again!

  • dillydally on Feb 18, 2009

    Aw, lovely Liane, you know, I can’t read one of your poems without getting a tear in my eye! A simple yet emotion provoking piece x

  • mradil on Feb 22, 2009

    now what can i say..its beautiful

  • livemike on Feb 23, 2009

    Lovely words..

  • Vikram Chhabra on Mar 1, 2009

    Catches the innocence of love. Good job!!

  • Tate Morgan on Mar 4, 2009

    Beautiful

  • Papa Sparks on Mar 4, 2009

    Very beautiful and moving. You are a very good writer and it is an honor to read your literary stylings.

  • Nick Kenney on Mar 5, 2009

    Sounds like love to me! My hat is off to you again Liane…

  • Lisa Medd on Mar 5, 2009

    You are an inspiration!! such great writing!

  • SHILAHO on Mar 10, 2009

    it really brings the feeling alive!

  • Colleen Ranney on Mar 23, 2009

    Cupid must have been hiding out somewhere just smiling. This is heartwarming. I love lovers. Great poem

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