Falling over is a little haiku!

It’s not clever to, 

Fall over. it’s quite painful 

Ouch, my wrist is sore 

Krrymarie

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  • Joie Schmidt on Sep 12, 2010

    Awww =( – cute poem!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 13, 2010

    Is this haiku about you? A cute piece.

    Christine

  • GodsGrace on Sep 13, 2010

    Cute Post

  • John Cornor on Sep 13, 2010

    Indeed, so cute yet very nice.

  • R.Laws on Sep 13, 2010

    nice poem

  • 1hopefulman on Sep 13, 2010

    It made me chuckle!

  • richardpeeej on Sep 26, 2010

    Ha ha Kerry I know how this feels my friend. I fell over in the garden and broke my femur (thigh ) about 12 weeks ago-and didn’t have anything to drink previously either…lol
    It has mended fine now though.

  • krrymarie on Oct 1, 2010

    thanks guys,
    Richard, same here couldn’t have been any more sober if i tried!
    My hand is out of cast now, had to go to the hospital they thought I had fractured my scaphoid, but i haven’t so now treating it as a sprain!
    Glad you mended up ok!

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