Falling Petals

Lady Sunshine on Apr 9, 2011

Tags: falling, petals, Rain, roses, shatter, shiver, undone, velvet, winter

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Velvet petals falling…roses coming undone.

© Lady Sunshine

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Guy Hogan on Apr 9, 2011
It is very visual. That is the kind of poetry that I like.
CHIPMUNK on Apr 9, 2011
lovely poem
Erin Miller on Apr 9, 2011
Aw sweet poem. I still love Trashy Kitty. Maru is soooo cute!
Martin Kloess on Apr 10, 2011
very good
Starpisces on Apr 10, 2011
lovely one from a romantic writer.
Anuradha Ramkumar on Apr 11, 2011
So beautfiul.
Shirley Shuler on Apr 11, 2011
Hi Lady Sunshine, very beautiful, I can see the wet shatter petals on the ground.

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