Here the speaker is having a very romantic time with his beloved in the wonderland and suddenly finds him crude reality in life.

Dinner together at a restaurant, You’re so brilliant, so romantic, You’re gliding me as you’re singing a lyric. Through the night was so wonderful and dreamy, There was full moon in the midnight sky. The stars were glimmering gleefully, Your eyes were shining like pearl and crystal, Your lips were gently pattering on mine, made my blood rushing through my vine, I felt I was flying in the sky. When the night was over, I knew I am now nothing but a falling star from the sky.

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  • Redfiery on Jul 25, 2011

    wow ! I told you earlier that ur a good poet as well

  • mona rastogi on Jul 25, 2011

    nice post

  • B.Beecansee on Jul 25, 2011

    Impressive poem …

  • fatmaazahra on Jul 25, 2011

    nice poem…

  • roehill on Jul 25, 2011

    Nice post.

  • Swish3 on Jul 25, 2011

    great job..i like it

  • tonyleather on Jul 26, 2011

    brilliant verse. well done

  • Muzammil196 on Jul 26, 2011

    Excellent.

  • Peace Poet on Jul 26, 2011

    Excellent poem full of Romantic melancholy. Best Wishes.

  • Netty net on Jul 26, 2011

    I loved it,

  • FallenSkyy on Jul 26, 2011

    Lovely.

  • HopeHoping on Jul 28, 2011

    Wow this was beautifully written.
    I loved it!

  • yeasin on Jul 28, 2011

    thanks all for ur comments

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