Teeth strengthen the whole head area. Minus the teeth is equivalent to minus protection.

My teeth was once complete,
As the years went by,
They started to rot,
Even daily brushing didn’t stop,
My precious teeth fell apart.

My tears flow as the pain begin
In my gums that swell deep within,
And at night, moving left to the right
With my pillow stuck hard to my face,
Just to ease a little bit of my hard earned pain.

Falling teeth just begin unnoticeably,
As I grow older, more care is needed,
To appease and slow down its rottenness,
Maybe even to protect that all teeth care preserved,
And avert this tragedy of the falling teeth.

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  • CA Johnson on Aug 17, 2009

    You did a great job with this poem. A tooth ache can be extremely painful so I can only imagine what you must have gone through when you had to go through it.

  • ceegirl on Aug 17, 2009

    Yes, when we get older everything goes out of place.

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 17, 2009

    Perfectly poem about this subject. like it!

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 17, 2009

    I meant perfect poem about this subject. Like it!

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Aug 17, 2009

    It’s a hard thing to give up a tooth–even when it has been giving one pain.

  • kathie107 on Aug 17, 2009

    Very nice poem, I liked it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 18, 2009

    Toothache can be so painful but it did inspire you to write this lovely poem.

    Christine

  • Marie Milton on Aug 18, 2009

    Eeewwwww that makes me feel bad…!!!
    I often have dreams of my teeth falling out….I hate it

  • alc on Aug 18, 2009

    Nice job!!! I’m going to brush me teeth again!!!

  • Hugo La Rosa on Aug 18, 2009

    A very useful poem indeed! Thank you.

  • cebuanaeyez on Aug 18, 2009

    Is there a dentist around…lol!

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