Inspired by my family.

I love your tagline there, about a woman and girl,

if only man would care, and learn to share this world…

First came the man, the best was yet to come,

she was a woman, now life would be fun…

For without her, his heart would not stir,

so the creator above, gave him a woman to love…

There is no other, to respect and honor,

a girl whose a minor, and a woman whose a mother…

So give them salutations, they are the cream of the nations,

every woman and girl, we are a family of the world…  

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  • Joan on Dec 7, 2009

    Hey, this is very good!!!

  • Eliza Brown on Jan 18, 2010

    Every poem I read of yours I enjoy. You’re such a great writer!

  • Colleen Ranney on Feb 7, 2010

    Wonderful expressions of the heart! I liked this.

  • KathrynVisconte on Feb 16, 2010

    Here’s to you for you salutation to your family & ladies. The way life is supposed to be.
    Kind Regards.
    Kathryn Visconte

  • KathrynVisconte on Feb 16, 2010

    By the way, you have a very fine looking family there!

    Kathryn

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