Fanged Demon

Darla Cooke on Jan 2, 2010

Scary poem.

Icy shivers course down my spine,

I’ve never felt fear like this before.

As I stroll cautiously through the forest,

a fierce howl echoes in the distance.

Monsters are secluded among the trees,

they are surrounding me from all sides.

My escape will soon become futile,

my soul will forever be doomed.

A fanged demon is watching me,

ready to drink my life-giving blood.

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Comments (10)

cutedrishti8 on Jan 2, 2010
Wonderfully written..
Olivia Van Logum on Jan 2, 2010
I don’t want to be bitten by a fanged demon!!!

Scary poem!
ken bultman on Jan 2, 2010
You need to stay out of the woods…graveyards,too.
T. S. Lewis on Jan 2, 2010
Strikes fear to its core. Nice one
albert1jemi on Jan 2, 2010
nice poem
alc on Jan 2, 2010
You never fail to take imagination away from your work! I love to read it! Thanks for another amazing write!
Goodselfme on Jan 2, 2010
Another one well described.TX
AlmaG on Jan 2, 2010
A fanged demon is indeed scary. Great imagery.
Lauren Axelrod on Jan 3, 2010
This is so interesting. It almost seems like a story for a children\\\’s book, a scary one of course.
STEVE666 on Jan 4, 2010
Scary stuff, Darla! Good write!

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