My attempt at two limericks with Asian themes.

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A radiant flower from Korea
Was picking the lovely bloom Althea
Singing a pretty tune
About her man in the moon
As she sashayed in her dress made from rhea

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There once was a kunoichi from Japan
Who was from the Fu-Ma ninja clan
A skilled demon huntress
Never a damsel in distress
Who can hold her own against any man

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  • megamatt09 on Mar 5, 2011

    Good work, thank you for sharing.

  • Atanacio on Mar 5, 2011

    Loved it– yeah the cartoons too–well mostly the cartoons

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 5, 2011

    I really enjoyed these limericks. Well done.

  • Starpisces on Mar 5, 2011

    very enjoyable read, Lady Sunshine. Nice limericks.

  • Erin Miller on Mar 5, 2011

    I really like these and love the second art picture.

  • FX777222999 on Mar 5, 2011

    Nice poem form you have. good!

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 5, 2011

    Wow, those are absolutely beautiful.

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Mar 5, 2011

    You are very talented. I really enjoyed your limericks. Lovely pictures especially the costumes.

  • Blue Buttefly on Mar 6, 2011

    lovely! I like it!

  • Stable on Mar 6, 2011

    They were both excellent but my personal favourite is the second. Would love to read more…

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 6, 2011

    Very good,

  • bailieman on Mar 6, 2011

    You could be the innovator of a new realm in Asian poetry.

  • alisson44 on Mar 6, 2011

    I have never read a thing like this. Impressive.

  • papaleng on Mar 8, 2011

    Love this one lady Sunshine.

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 9, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, enjoying your limericks so much, and as always, love the pictures.

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