A haiku.

fart to me my love
smell might be spoiled or rotten
I will hug you still

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  • Darla Cooke on May 19, 2009

    Interesting haiku.

  • JUPITER on May 19, 2009

    funny!

  • karen on May 19, 2009

    hahaha, amazing!

  • chris on May 19, 2009

    how sweet.lmao!

  • may on May 19, 2009

    This haiku is just so amazing, very creative!!! lol

  • patgcelino on May 19, 2009

    Very nice and funny! I like it!

  • mark on May 19, 2009

    hahahaha!I like ur haiku!keep on posting!

  • lowellpendon on May 20, 2009

    LOL

  • richard reed on May 21, 2009

    lol nice..courageous lady.,,.stay blessed..your friend..Rich

  • clay hurtubise on May 21, 2009

    Good one.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • TOPELECTRICIAN on May 22, 2009

    well at least you have a great sense of humor!…lol you’ll need it on here believe me!….mike

  • The Cinders on Jul 29, 2009

    Ha, lovely. I like that there’s kind of a sense of unconditional love.

  • 12thofnever on Sep 16, 2009

    thanks every1 for reading and the compliments! I’m kinda busy from school activities, will be writing more soon!

  • Teves on Nov 17, 2009

    Nice post…

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 8, 2009

    “You must really like the guy” If the buster wants to fart he needs to clear the room if possible. :)

  • Stan Wilson on Jan 5, 2010

    A foul wind brings no joy,
    coming from the ass of a boy,
    for it’s his best part,
    that’s gone in a fart…………..to be continued…as an inspiration thank you

  • Taking Care on Mar 11, 2010

    There is no magic involved and very few would claim it romantic.
    Like a burb or itch it is a part of the body’s way of functioning.

    To not love someone because they fart would be… (you can answer that one yourself)

    To love some one anyway is the same as loving someone even though they have cancer.

    I know farts make you giggle because they are funny and humiliating to most people due to the smell, but is cancer pretty just because you don’t see it? Or does it stink too, just not in the same way?

    A fart is just a fart!

  • TwiKnight on Apr 20, 2010

    Didn’t really expect a fart in a love haiku… nice one!!

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