About my father….. Every father is special.

Father’s Son

© 2010 Dr.P.Elayaraja

I like you my father

For more than many things, 

I love you my father

You gave me all suo motto, knowing my needs, 

As I grew tall

You were pleased with my deeds, 

Thank you is a mere

All words are just a few, 

..

I wish you were here

Seeing your dreams come true!!!

© 2010 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 7, 2010

    Really very nice…very touching….

  • The Quail 1957 on Feb 7, 2010

    Well done my friend.

  • Ranjan Mathews on Feb 7, 2010

    True to the core
    Father’s love to the fore.

  • T. S. Lewis on Feb 7, 2010

    A wonderful tribute.

  • Guy Hogan on Feb 7, 2010

    Fathers are special people. In the real world all fathers are not good fathers; but the good ones are worth their weight in gold.

  • Brenda Nelson on Feb 7, 2010

    I am my fathers daughter, he is very ill right now, so this poem meant a lot.

  • Jenny Heart on Feb 7, 2010

    Touching!

  • metro7 on Feb 7, 2010

    Fantastic few words but says it all.thxs for the share.

  • Shaju on Feb 7, 2010

    The photography is amazing – nice capture….. Sets the mood for the poem……I am sure you will also be an awesome father……Take care…

  • Darla Cooke on Feb 7, 2010

    Lovely poem!

  • Bijoy Keyar on Feb 7, 2010

    Great

  • Stan Wilson on Feb 7, 2010

    I like this poem,although my dad has been gone for many years, but last evening while watering the garden,I suddenly thought about my father,and how I missed him so,actually miss them both,mom and dad……So if your parents are still with you today spend as much time as you can with them…once they are gone.thats part of your past gone….thank you for this very lovely poem and reminder……awesome…..

  • Atanacio on Feb 7, 2010

    A Hallmark tribute well done my friend

  • Frances Lawrence on Feb 7, 2010

    Beautiful, I wish I still had my father.

  • bailieman on Feb 7, 2010

    I can only agree with writeme’s comments.

  • AlmaG on Feb 7, 2010

    What a wonderful tribute for fathers :)

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 7, 2010

    Well done.

  • deep blue on Feb 7, 2010

    A nice ode to your old man. Well expressed.

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 7, 2010

    A touching tribute to your dad.

  • mo hoyal on Feb 7, 2010

    This was beautiful writing. My dad passed at an early age but I still miss him as though it was yesterday that we were doing so many things together.
    Thank you for a beautiful sharing from your heart.

  • VTech on Feb 7, 2010

    Good Post , Thanks For sharing.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Feb 7, 2010

    VERY NICE LIKE FATHER LIKE SON
    LHLHLH

  • Jenilia12 on Feb 7, 2010

    very inspiring one

  • albert1jemi on Feb 7, 2010

    very good one

  • Eunice Tan on Feb 7, 2010

    Wonderful!

  • JannyCZ on Feb 8, 2010

    Touching. You never forget the loss of a parent or child. You heal and move on with life but you never stop missing them even though they are with us in our hearts always. A hug from them we could use so much.

  • wonder on Feb 8, 2010

    This brings back fond memories.

  • standingproud on Feb 8, 2010

    and I just wrote of my father.
    They very special.
    This is very special :)

  • Lord Banks on Feb 8, 2010

    Excellent words and images, its a very powerful image a father holding his baby son, good stuff. LB

  • Ask Cash on Feb 8, 2010

    All dads are super arent they?

  • diamondpoet on Feb 8, 2010

    That was beautiful thanks for shaing.

  • martie on Feb 8, 2010

    excellent trubute to your father.

  • seema1962 on Feb 8, 2010

    wonderful tribute to fathers

  • papaleng on Feb 8, 2010

    beautiful . great tribute. I alsao miss my dad.

  • alensmith on Feb 8, 2010

    nice healdline u chossen fathers’s son

  • chantell on Feb 8, 2010

    great work.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 8, 2010

    my son is also fond of his father very much..father is a great leader to all one who love him..that was a true poem.

  • bpyuvaraju on Feb 8, 2010

    I love my father…….. these lines made me more touching

  • devsir on Feb 8, 2010

    Very emotional

  • John Paul V on Feb 8, 2010

    Great read.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 8, 2010

    Nice thoughts

  • devsir on Feb 9, 2010

    Very emotional and heart touching

  • Sharif Ishnin on Feb 10, 2010

    Lovely write!

  • Val Mills on Feb 10, 2010

    Thanks for sharing this lovely tribute.

  • LewSethics on Feb 10, 2010

    nice one, doc

  • Jane Jane on Feb 10, 2010

    that’s sweet but I’m not quite that close with my father.

  • yes me on Feb 10, 2010

    Great share nice friend

  • lillyrose on Feb 11, 2010

    beautifully touching.

  • xoxo on Feb 12, 2010

    A very good tribute for a father. Very nice poem.

  • CA Johnson on Feb 12, 2010

    Great dedication to your father. I really enjoyed reading.

  • Kristie Leong MD on Feb 13, 2010

    Very touching. :-)

  • Aiyanna on Feb 15, 2010

    A very touching write and its very true!!! Thank you for the share… :)

  • Lipstick on Feb 20, 2010

    im sure ur Dad was a great man..mine too..this one reminds me of him :)

  • swatilohani on Feb 24, 2010

    soul stirring

  • swatilohani on Feb 24, 2010

    a heart warming piece

  • Francois Hagnere on Feb 24, 2010

    I thought of my Father who died a long time ago.
    Beautiful tribute.

  • Cynthia Cox on Feb 26, 2010

    A sweet and touching tributes to all dads. Thank for you for sharing your talents.

  • rizzei on Mar 11, 2010

    it\’s just about everything..well done^^

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