Struggle that never stops…

In the corner of my dream could not impregnated
I stood on thousands of impressions breath
dark mist blinding pace

Fall
pieces of life that do not also understand
already kudaki

Sweat, tired
reach out my hand, wriggle
bush brushed snare

despite measures to stop the old Wherever
embroidery pieces back expectations

…………………november 2010

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  • awesome11 on Nov 29, 2010

    Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

  • strategy03 on Nov 29, 2010

    You have done a great job

  • rafihan on Dec 9, 2010

    for Awesome11 and strategy03:: I’m really thank you for you… God Bless You…

  • rafihan on Dec 9, 2010

    for Awesome11 and strategy03:: I\’m really thank you for you… God Bless You…

  • rafihan on Dec 9, 2010

    for Awesome11 and strategy03:: I\\\’m really thank you for you… God Bless You…

  • rafihan on Dec 9, 2010

    for Awesome11 and strategy03:: I\\\\\\\’m really thank you for you… God Bless You…

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