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Fed Up

Dewan Golam Shafi Choudhury on Feb 14, 2009
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Every time I go somewhere, she is there with me but against me.

What more shall I endure?
What more shall I see of her?
I am fed up of lurking around the world while she is in front of me!
Every time I go somewhere, she is there with me but against me!
I am now fed up!
I want her away!
Let her disappear far away that she cannot even enter this solar system no more!
I am fed up of her!
I am totally fed up!

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  • Unofre Pili on Feb 14, 2009

    The emotion is intense.A nice written piece.

  • Peter Cimino on Feb 14, 2009

    Sometimes walking away is the hardest thing to do…..but it must be done. Good work.

  • Joie Schmidt on Feb 14, 2009

    The passion and pain is poignant!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Joshua Miguel on Feb 16, 2009

    i can feel the emotions here. you are really fed up. great work.

  • Carolyn Cordon on Feb 21, 2009

    A short poem, but not a sweet one. The passion is evident. Well done.

  • Resounding Glass on Mar 24, 2009

    Great poem. I like how you really portray the strong emotions.

    Keep up the good work,

    -Resounding Glass

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