Feel

Alaina Ellington on Sep 16, 2008

Tags: emotion, emotional, feel, feelings, hate, heartache, Life, living, love, marriage, relationship

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I feel like breathing.

I feel like screaming
but have no voice
feel like breathing
there is no air
feel like moving
but cannot walk
feel like crying
unable to shed a tear

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mdegenhardt on Oct 24, 2008
Those can be very common feelings but so very overwhelming. You’ve touched on things that many experience and I hope that they get past. This is clear in its intent and flows easily when reading. Michael
hfj on Jan 21, 2009
Very expressive piece. An early sign of depression.

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