I felt really down and I wrote to express my feelings of let down.

Sorrow

storm clouds arrives

water falls like raging flies

Pain

not just a feeling

an open sore not worth healing

Grief

unable to get back what is lost

a snowy day and the windows wont defrost

Betrayal

to say you will do

and never had time to come through

Hate

full of regret and remorse

I watch her carried away in a hearse

GOD

Im clueless of what to do

I just pray to god he will show me a way 

and with that I get on my hands and knees 

and just pray……..

“Storm is over know  and I can see the heavens” R Kelly

 

 

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  • Vaibhav Diwaker on Aug 18, 2009

    Nice…the photo is eye catching…loved the presentation..

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 18, 2009

    Well done, you get an I like.

  • live and lovin life on Oct 1, 2009

    beautifully written…..

  • Teves on Nov 4, 2009

    NIce writen and i love the photo.

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