Feeling Your Warmth

ssaunders on Oct 22, 2009

The beautiful feeling of summer sun.
Let me know what you think of it thank you.

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I can feel your warmth

all over

You caress me in your needed touch

It feels as if you run your soothing fingers

over my body

As the feeling of you gets stronger

over time

The heat is stronger and it makes me feel

like I’m on fire

I can feel you here I can feel you there

you’re everywhere

SUNSHINE!

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Roberto Sardelli 1 on Oct 22, 2009
very well said and written, it put a smile on my face
cardy on Oct 22, 2009
A lovely choice of words, written well loved this nice work.
Aiyanna on Oct 22, 2009
Excellent work!!
The Last Ogre on Oct 22, 2009
I thought it was something else Good poem.
shaii on Oct 22, 2009
simple, nice.
Aldrin A Wilding West on Oct 26, 2009
Really like the flow and feeling of this, but check your use of your and you’re…..particularly in the last line? Loved it though. Very good imagery from a young mind.
obikelvin on Oct 28, 2009
great post!
LOVELYHONEY on Oct 31, 2009
I NEED THE WARMTH

OF THE RISING SUN

AS I RISE OFTENER TOO

WHERE CAN I GET

THAT WARMTH FROM

CAN SOME ONE TELL ME

IF NOT YOU

nice poem
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 14, 2009
i am reading all ur poems

almost all again

these each one is lovely

only how i wish i was much younger

the warmth of a human being

i really hunger

Hi there!