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                                                         Feelings

The body aches all over yet there’s no sign for the pain,

it started with paying the bills and nothing left again.

It got even worse when my friends came over here,

course we talked about the same woes over my last two friggin beers.

I’d lay and watch some TV but the cable isn’t on,

I’d call a few of my buddies but their cell phone minutes are gone.

Man I feel aches all over, I guess depression really does hurt,

that’s why I guess I feel better the most when my butt is at work.

I don’t really consider myself a complainer but man I need to gripe

I would go out to the bar but everyone is bitching there tonight.

So I’ll sit here on the porch  cause the AC is now off,

drink down this last bottle of Jack cause like the money……when it’s gone it’s gone!

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  • Daisy Peasblossom on Aug 19, 2009

    Boy, can I ever relate! Hang in there, tho, great poem! “The sun will come up tomorrow…”

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  • Trinket on Aug 30, 2009

    Im impressed, nice job. The words flowed very well and I really enjoyed it. I could also relate and yet laugh too. Keep it up.

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