Fibonacci Poetry Challenge: Long Distance Love

manahfromheaven on Jan 15, 2012

This is a respond to Philly’s challenge. Please join, let’s have fun. We never know, we might win $500 from this. LOL. Just kidding.

far,
wide
ocean..
separates
this two young lovers…
how can cupid mistakenly
arrowed hearts of people from half way around the world?

miles
far
apart,
these lovers
are working it out,
as they long to be together
both dreaming that one day, they can hold each other’s arms

hard
yeah
its tough
this long distance love
but this two young hearts wont give up
as love don’t see distance and what matters is their hearts

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Comments (7)

PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 15, 2012
This is awesome! I like the hopefulness of this piece, and way to use those 13 syllable lines
SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 16, 2012
Sweet
xphantoms on Jan 17, 2012
nice, like it
Ruby Hawk on Jan 17, 2012
Unusual, I like it but I didn’t understand what the challenge is.
RichardBanner on Jan 21, 2012
cool concept
manahfromheaven on Jan 25, 2012
Hi Ruby. Please read Philly’s article http://scienceray.com/mathematics/poetry-challenge-fibonacci-poetry/ to understand more about the challenge..

Thanks everyone!
Vinaya says good bye on Feb 13, 2012
Images are wonderful, metaphors very fresh, the form very brilliant.

Hi there!