Yes I do know why your brown eyes when you look at me seems to see my inner soul…

As we lay here in this field of clover looking at the sky,
you graze my face with your touch and yes I do know why.
Your brown eyes when you look at me seems to see my inner soul,
and off we drift into this place in love and completely whole.
Why do we have to go back to reality and leave this special place,
as a breeze blows through your hair and I kiss your beautiful face.
You brought me into your heart and you also over took mine,
sometimes it takes a lifetime to discover this great big find.
As we cuddle close in our embrace the world has gone away,
Only you are in my world forever as the trees they slowly sway.
The warmth of the sun kisses our bodies as we lay so very close,
I love you baby for all you are forever as it is you that I have chose.

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  • Morgana on Feb 20, 2009

    Very sweet and loving :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 20, 2009

    This is beautiful Linda. You took me away to that place with you.

    Christine

  • miraj on Feb 20, 2009

    hi linda,

    this is a sweet poem describing a true emotion of a lover.very nice.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,linda
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • Will Gray on Feb 20, 2009

    So very beautiful and romantic! Awesome write!!

  • Nadine1502 on Feb 20, 2009

    Your words convey the intimacy, taking us along with you for the ride – gorgeous X

  • MJPatrick on Feb 20, 2009

    Really sweet and romantic!

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 20, 2009

    wow… that was so sweet…

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 20, 2009

    very loely

  • Bren Parks on Feb 20, 2009

    Very romantic!

  • R J Grant on Feb 20, 2009

    Nice to see you still have that beautiful soul Linda.

    Grant

    (Not exactly back, but trying to stay in touch. – what do you want me to write about?)

  • Joshua Miguel on Feb 20, 2009

    very romantice poem. nice read.

  • nutuba on Feb 20, 2009

    Beautiful and romantic, nicely done!

  • Debra. on Feb 20, 2009

    Such a beautiful piece, Linda!

  • lindalulu on Feb 20, 2009

    Grant…its GREAT to see you back writing and in the comments section…lol! Write about anything your heart desires as always. I have missed you as I am sure a lot of the others have too! Welcome Back!!!!

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 20, 2009

    Stay in the clover and out of the Thistles and nettles and you will continue to have and write beautiful love poems like this.

  • B Nelson on Feb 20, 2009

    .. and thats why I live in the country not the city, just not the same kissing a loved one while lying on the cement in Wal Mart parking lot.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 20, 2009

    Sweet and lovely poem.

  • Lisa Mc. on Feb 21, 2009

    Nice job..

  • Inna Tysoe on Feb 21, 2009

    Well done.

    Inna

  • Liane Schmidt on Feb 21, 2009

    So sweetly romantic!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Darlene McFarlane on Feb 21, 2009

    Beautiful and….beautiful!

  • BoJack454 on Feb 23, 2009

    Very nice

  • eddiego65 on Feb 25, 2009

    Lovely and romantic piece.

  • weegysgram on Feb 27, 2009

    very nice and so romantic. Good read!

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Mar 2, 2009

    ahhh love

  • DA Cournean on Jun 10, 2009

    This is beautiful!

  • Juancav on Jun 10, 2009

    Great work LulĂș.

  • kate smedley on Jun 11, 2009

    Beautiful and romantic poem, thanks for sharing.

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