Fighting The Feeling

carissimi on Oct 9, 2010

Fighting the need.

fighting the feeling

fighting the need

to be in the solitude

i could go away

not run away

just go away

do you hear the difference?

i want to walk in woods

that the sun shines through

hearing a creek trickling by

spread my arms up to the sky

fall asleep up the vines

close my eyes

smell the sweet grass

feel the wind breezing by

enjoying each moment

breathing with the light

loving the slowness

and the passing of time

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Comments (9)

Raj the Tora on Oct 9, 2010
Beeeeeeutiful Poetry. Even I feel like that at times. thanks.
TwiKnight on Oct 10, 2010
LoveDoctor on Oct 10, 2010
A vivid description using all the five senses to convey emotion.

Good work
Starpisces on Oct 10, 2010
very well expressed, yes, there’s a difference between go away and run away..
Anuradha Ramkumar on Oct 10, 2010
Vivid description and an enjoyable read.
GodsGrace on Oct 10, 2010
Very Nice
Ethics0006 on Oct 10, 2010
Nice Poetry
Joie Schmidt on Oct 10, 2010
Passionate & beautiful.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
ishinimrod on Oct 15, 2010
Nice share my friend.

You’ve made a great piece!

Sincerely Yours,

Ishinimrod
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