Mini Rythem and Blues Song.

It looks like we’re fighting

And I’m going to win

Yeah It looks like we’re fighting

And I know you will lose

You are always giving me a hard time

And I hate you.

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It seems that you have no thought

For anybody but yourself

And you yell and scream

And rant and rave

karma will come to you

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We’re fighting

And I know that I’ll win

And you wil be the one who loses

We’re fighting

And sucker I will win………………………………..

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  • seashell66 on Jul 1, 2010

    I liked it..It does sound like it could be a blues song…

  • Rohit19 on Jul 1, 2010

    Oh dear! I just read your other poem and this was totally the oppsite of it… God, both the pieces however, deal with karma!!! lol :)

  • maranatha on Jul 1, 2010

    Lose the hatred, Catrina. that’s the only way you win. Otherwise you both lose.

    Do you have a tune in your head? I could picture this with a guitar….

  • millerandybr on Jul 1, 2010

    hmm good and bad u r balanced but shes right u wnt win with hate

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