Final Check? (Fibonacci Form)

tankermone on Jan 26, 2012

Tags: Check, final, gray, left, raise, smile, way

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Waiting for a raise, or else?

FINAL CHECK? (Fibonacci form)

May

Stay

This way,

All the day,

And e-ve-ry pay-

Day, until I am so that way,

One with a wonderful raise to make me smile and stay,

Else, e-ve-rything gone away,

No one sees the gray,

Left my way,

This day,

Hey,

Yay!

PTR January 26, 2011

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Comments (6)

PHILLY DREAMER on Jan 26, 2012
This is a great piece, are you adding it to the Fibonacci Poetry challenge?
mynameisjessica on Jan 26, 2012
Very nice work.
mhassanmemon on Jan 27, 2012
Haha great work, loved it!
sha4nny on Jan 27, 2012
Very funny, but this is a new form to me!
Lisa Marie Mottert on Jan 27, 2012
Love this… great piece!
Martin Kloess on Jan 27, 2012
Perfect! thank you

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