Final Hours

stryka66 on Apr 18, 2010

Trying to capture those last moments of a loved one’s earthly journey.

Observing patiently,

Feeling helplessly

frustration’s pangs.

Unfolding agony

compounding misery

as life hangs precariously

in the balance.

~~~

Declining speedily,

Calling desperately

for memory’s succour.

Engaging sympathy

sustaining mercy

as death waits menacingly

in the wings

~~~

Caring tenderly,

Touching gently

fevered brow.

Hearing spiritually

bringing clarity

as angels sing triumphantly

their welcome song

~~~

Releasing into realms unknown

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drelayaraja on Apr 18, 2010
wonderful writing.. I loved most of the words you have handled.
Jonie on Apr 18, 2010
Hearing spiritually
bringing clarity
as angels sing triumphantly
their welcome song

Thank God for His love and welcome home.
I like it how you progress from misery to hope.
God bless!
ken bultman on Apr 18, 2010
Beautifully handled…another voice joins the choir.
kate smedley on Apr 18, 2010
A heartfelt journey Alec, from despair triumphant hope, beautifully done.
Carmen on Apr 18, 2010
Full of hope of what is to come, love it Alec.
Neva Flores on Apr 18, 2010
One of your best, wonderful!
Roberta J. Morrison on Apr 18, 2010
Very moving poem, Alec.
Debra. on Apr 18, 2010
Another lovely poem, Alec!
retrit on Apr 18, 2010
I enjoyed this well written poem,Alec! Thank you..
Barbara on Apr 18, 2010
Wonderful writing –very hopeful!
katie marie on Apr 18, 2010
You touched on all those pieces that are part of those final moments. Well done.
carole (bishy57) on Apr 19, 2010
very moving indeed, very well written.
Christine Ramsay on Apr 19, 2010
A very sad but beautiful and moving piece.

Christine
mistymorrning on Apr 19, 2010
an affirmation that life lives on..parting is painful but necessary..in order to hear the angels ..sami
Lady Sunshine on Apr 20, 2010
Such a moving piece…delicately expressed.
ShadowPsychos on May 2, 2010
great write

Hi there!