This man wants to go for a final swim now that life is nothing to him.

I am engulfed in pain
Pain that I can not outrun
God, please hear my cries
Betrayal
More than all of that in the
Past combined
Aches
The aches in my heart I
Can not overcome
Love
Never ending
Love that I will never
Be able to overtake
Nor will I be able to endure
Again
Depression
GOD himself would be
Astonished at the magnitude
I stand at the mighty Mississippi
Should I take the final plunge
Pain would exist no more
Love would be gone
Aches would be overcome
No more worries of betrayal
No more depression
I think I want to go for a
Swim

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  • EternalSleep32294 on Jan 6, 2008

    Very dark…a bit depressing, even for me, but it’s still very good.

  • Nelson Doyle on Feb 28, 2008

    Erwin, very sad and a bit depressing. I hope that you aren\’t feeling this way anymore. I would like to read some of your happier stuff.

    Nelson Doyle

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