A destination reached.

Its time to face the facts, I am where I am because the way I act,
I tried and failed its happened before, searching for the key to unlock the right door.
I was wrong and now I pay, not everything can go my way.
I can see mistakes and try to get pass them, dont even worry Its myself I condemn.
Now I am taking my fall, I dont deny that I wanted it all,
I was blind to even see and nobody who knows could ever disagree.
 So let me know what can I do, I think for me its all through,                                                                               
I can move but Im still not breathing, In my own words I am still seething.
 I was told and I was led but I inside I still feel dead,

Must I rise up again,  be burned by my sin, sometimes I feel I want to give in.

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  • Rose on Nov 13, 2008

    dark and sad! Good writing!

  • HatedNation on Nov 13, 2008

    Click here for all my work..

  • Brandt on Nov 14, 2008

    Just read this one, I\’ve been a little busy. I like it.

  • amy on Nov 14, 2008

    I like this poem alot. I have read some of your other work you are a good writer.

  • HatedNation on Nov 15, 2008

    I have read some really deep works lately, I wish i could find that in my own work, but I like the simplicity in these

  • Ly(+_+)ma on Nov 15, 2008

    I am at the same dark place! The one that you feel trapped , that there is no way out ,but hey life didn’t came w/ an instruction guide.

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