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Collette Edwards on Sep 10, 2009

Tags: bubbles nose. where, poem, Soap, toes, water flow

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Poem?

I went to where the water flows.

Soap runs down between my toes,

Bubbles lay upon my nose.

Where am I?

~Collette~

Copywrites 09-10-09

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kizichat on Sep 10, 2009
a car wash?
ken bultman on Sep 11, 2009
In day care?
Emma Green on Sep 11, 2009
This has made me think and will be sure to come up with the answer! The sign of a powerful poem, good work!
ducroisjosef on Sep 11, 2009
Bubbles lay upon your nose?
Soap runs down between your toes?
Over where the water flows?
You’re shampooed ‘neath the garden hose!
Darla Smith on Sep 11, 2009
Shower?
kirstynjackaboos on Sep 11, 2009
the shower i think hehe, cute poem x
Jane Jane on Sep 11, 2009
interesting.=) I’ll go with shower.=)
Nikita K on Sep 11, 2009
You are in a bath!!! Nice and cute!
Lady Sunshine on Sep 11, 2009
LOL…Cute piece! And Ken’s answer made me laugh.
Collette Edwards on Sep 11, 2009
hee hee for all you who guessed shower you found me lol So did my sweetie after I left him this note while he was walking the dog and I loved kens answer, though I’m not sure how he arrived at that answer LMAO!!

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