Home » Poetry » Finding a Friend

Finding a Friend

Ethics0006 on Aug 24, 2010
31

I am finding a friend. I wrote what is my desire to be a friend likes a person as following:

This will be above the trend

With emotions that can bend

Give love for permanently lend

A message is send

I am finding a friend

Lots of loves for send

16
Liked it
Comments (31)
  • Billybobetbo on Aug 24, 2010

    Very Nicely written, as always!

  • GodsGrace on Aug 24, 2010

    Beautiful Poem with great rhyming

  • rainav on Aug 24, 2010

    short and sweet

  • carissimi on Aug 24, 2010

    very lovely

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Aug 24, 2010

    Lovely one.

  • drelayaraja on Aug 24, 2010

    Wonderful poem :>

  • heidiefernandez on Aug 24, 2010

    beautiful lines….

  • PSingh1990 on Aug 24, 2010

    lovely lines….

    Thanks for share.

  • zain0077 on Aug 24, 2010

    Nicely written

  • Likha on Aug 24, 2010

    Friends are everywhere. Well-expressed poem.

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Aug 24, 2010

    hope u find ur desired friend.. nice post :)

  • Lord Banks on Aug 24, 2010

    Great work says it all in so few words excellent! LB

  • LCM Linda on Aug 24, 2010

    Interesting poem. Hope you find not just one but many friends. Thanks for sharing.

  • Kathleen Murphy on Aug 24, 2010

    Nice poem with a lovely sentiment!

  • giftarist on Aug 24, 2010

    Well penned piece, liked it!

  • sapphirelaws on Aug 24, 2010

    i like the rhyming words! good work!

  • akira14 on Aug 24, 2010

    hey i can be your friend!

  • Melinda J on Aug 24, 2010

    Cool words!

  • Joseph Scott on Aug 25, 2010

    Well said! Good work!

  • johnpillai on Aug 25, 2010

    simple and sweet.

  • Temjen Imchen on Aug 25, 2010

    Found or about to find??? Lovely.

  • Kaye TM on Aug 26, 2010

    nice one.
    =p

  • massimo2020 on Aug 26, 2010

    I love the rhythm of it. good writing!

  • WebScribe on Aug 26, 2010

    What’s best is to be a friend without end!

  • Karen Gross on Aug 31, 2010

    “True friends like diamonds are precious and rare.”

  • 1hopefulman on Aug 31, 2010

    That poem is grand!

  • Phoenix Montoya on Sep 2, 2010

    Very nice :)

  • mysocalledlife on Sep 2, 2010

    your poem is so cute! hope you find lots of friend

  • ishinimrod on Sep 4, 2010

    :) Excellent!

  • Dana11 on Sep 18, 2010

    Nice!

  • Irishmick on Sep 27, 2010

    Nice.

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading

Categories