Finger on Your Body

fmakeita on Jan 16, 2010

It’s not what it seems…

You were my first

My fingers pass across your body

I pressed my fingertips on you

In bed I’m with you

I lay beside you

Do my work on you

Almost most of the hours I’m with you

When I’m with you for that long

You heat up

Your speed not bad

Memory so satisfying

I let you be on my lap

Most of the time we are alone together

Even though my day is so exhausted

I still manage to connect with you

Don’t know what to do without you

Oh, I love you so much

You are my hottie

My darling

My first

I’ll take good care of you

Oh, my Toshiba laptop J

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Comments (15)

johnnydod on Jan 16, 2010
hahahahaha nice ending .. and when I saw this title I did wonder OMG I wonder what this is about?
deep blue on Jan 16, 2010
Hot fingers on the keyboard. You had a great choice of brand. I have the same Toshiba Satellite.
Guy Hogan on Jan 16, 2010
Yes, our computers do become almost like lovers, we spend so much time with them. Very nice.
fmakeita on Jan 16, 2010
Whoohoo… My title worked lol. Lots of naughty people
in this generation so I thought that maybe if I made my title sound
naughty it may grab the spotlight
ceegirl on Jan 16, 2010
wow
Christine Ramsay on Jan 16, 2010
That is so funny. I was taken in right to the last line. You are naughty, LOL.

Christine
Darla Cooke on Jan 16, 2010
Great poem! I really like the ending to it.
Frances Lawrence on Jan 16, 2010
I love it! I have a Toshiba laptop too, and yes I take it to bed with me!
qasimdharamsy on Jan 17, 2010
Nice one….I enjoyed it….
albert1jemi on Jan 17, 2010
great poem
fmakeita on Jan 17, 2010
Glad everyone enjoyed it!!
standingproud on Jan 19, 2010
I was afraid to read
LOL.
good one
palak2008 on Jan 23, 2010
Wonderful one…
mkd1788 on Jan 25, 2010
you have expressed well..
LOVELYHONEY on Feb 1, 2010
U take my breadth away
As well as the heat I pray
I hope u will understand now
Why I keep the lappy
On my lap all day

It’s a cold wave
In a cold country
Is all I can say?
Thanks laptops have no sexuality
On any lap
They can heat up
And joy display
Buy your friends and foes
A laptop today

LHLHLH

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