Fire

denus on Jan 15, 2009

Tags: fire, Life, poem

About the fires that are burning at the moment.

Fire,
You burn like you have a fierce desire.
To destroy, the lives,
And homes of many people,
We need to find the steeple.
The smoke and flames,
Do we have someone to blame?

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Ziggy C on Jan 15, 2009
Great work.
Darla Smith on Jan 15, 2009
Great poem and nice picture you used with it.
Joni Keith on Jan 15, 2009
Wow, Denus. This one is really good.
Genevieve Horrall on Jan 15, 2009
Nice poem and the picture is just right
Sotiris on Jan 15, 2009
You have just mentioned the bad effects of fire! There are of course good ones like warm and light! Nice one though!
monica55 on Jan 15, 2009
Short but, spicy. Nice piece.
Monica
Lauren Axelrod on Jan 15, 2009
Fascinating piece
nutuba on Jan 15, 2009
Nicely done!
Bren Parks on Jan 15, 2009
Well done!
Tennessee Thompson on Jan 15, 2009
Good job.
AC Hamilton III on Jan 15, 2009
Great job!

Nice Picture.

AC
Angie0000023 on Jan 15, 2009
I love how you add pictures into your poetry. It makes it more alive. Keep up the good work!!!
marylou on Jan 15, 2009
it is so deep and meaningful. i ike it. makes my brain works.
sable Rose on Jan 15, 2009
Very nice Denus, you are developing those rhyming skills.
Bick Parker on Jan 16, 2009
Nice work. Thoughtful.
James DeVere on Jan 16, 2009
Now your talkin’ Get back to YOU – your original expression, man . j
Dry Ink on Jan 16, 2009
If you look close enough it looks like there’s a dragon in the fire.
Pablina on Jan 17, 2009
nice piece.
jakeycliffo on Jan 17, 2009
another peice of great work, keep it up
goodselfme on Jan 17, 2009
Deep and thoughtful poem
rutherfranc on Jan 20, 2009
HOT!!!
Intrepidus on Jan 22, 2009
Beautiful! n very symbolic
Jade Brooks on Jan 23, 2009
Good job Denus. I worked seven of the fires last year and wondered that.

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