With the eruption of a volcano spewing skywards, I felt as though I was swept up in love by fire that came from heaven.

Your love struck me

Like it was fire from heaven

It seems to spew forth 

Glorious embers

That I didn’t know what to believe

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It engrossed me

Like a volcano

On a mountain top

Displaying its brilliance

But it felt like

A thunder bolt

With accompanying flames

- – -

Oh! I just imagine

How I was swept away

And swallowed up

By such passion

- – -

But what could I do

When these flames

Gradually cease

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Putting on a terrific firework?

- – -

Will I return to my cocoon

And pine away

Like I did before

Or keep hoping

That these flames will endure

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  • Rosettaartist1 on Jan 12, 2012

    I like it

  • lapasan on Jan 12, 2012

    The fire in our heart is very difficult to put out.

  • Angelji on Jan 12, 2012

    passion.

  • FX777222999 on Jan 12, 2012

    Still burning inside your heart.

  • ashan1614 on Jan 12, 2012

    If the fire of love is true, it may wax and wane but it will never go out.

  • mphsglo on Jan 12, 2012

    Very nice. Love is an awesome thing when it’s between the right people.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 12, 2012

    You have expressed these passionate feelings so well.

  • juliachild on Jan 12, 2012

    Nice share

  • Eunike on Jan 12, 2012

    I like your choice of words

  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 13, 2012

    Very passionate

  • aheed411 on Jan 13, 2012

    I liked this

  • yes me on Jan 15, 2012

    Like this Erwin cheers

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