Comments on: Fire Within

By: lh

lh — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 04:00:49 +0000

the fire within me consumes me in full

there is no more fire

left

and now i am smouldering away

ur fire is burning that i can see

hope it contiues to ever burn

that it should be

so be it
let it be

By: ShellyB1875

ShellyB1875 — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 06:25:00 +0000

Wow, this is intense. You managed to convey how excruciating it can be for someone who longs for another without them ever knowing. Beautifully done.

By: Ella Currence

Ella Currence — Sat, 18 Jul 2009 17:08:53 +0000

Nicely written want to just keep on reading your work.

By: Ruby Hawk

Ruby Hawk — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 19:55:20 +0000

Well done, we can all identify.

By: PhoenixRox

PhoenixRox — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 17:29:47 +0000

Brilliant work yet again!! The passion shines right through..
regards,
Phoenix.

By: Ginky Binks

Ginky Binks — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 16:43:13 +0000

Ok second attempt at a comment…lol

I love this, its amazing how many people don’t share their true feelings.

Thanks for the lovely comments on my poems, really appreciated.

Of course my other comment said more than this, its never quite the same the second time around..lol

Ginks

By: Brittany Sue Martino

Brittany Sue Martino — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 13:13:58 +0000

Amazing…Loved it

By: clay hurtubise

clay hurtubise — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 12:51:40 +0000

Very nice.
Thanks,
Clay

By: Elizabeth Abbott

Elizabeth Abbott — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 04:13:33 +0000

I love this poem. It is original and distinctively yours. Beautiful lines expelling beautiful feelings.

By: irishpen

irishpen — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 02:31:20 +0000

Tanya–you are just a wonderful writer! Thank you-read it twice and will probably read it again~~