Thief and thugs.

He rocked back and forth in his chair,
his hands fell to his lap,
through the corner of his eye he peered,
and he felt like an animal in a trap,
two thugs came in firing hard,
his light faded,
his eyes shaded,
but before he died,
he heard a thug holler,
because in his wallet,
there was only one dollar.

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Comments (6)
  • Annfrank on Jan 16, 2009

    sad and happy I guess

  • Karey on Jan 18, 2009

    what a way to go and why die for a buck?

  • Mission on Apr 2, 2009

    a good write

  • EasyStreet on Apr 12, 2012

    this was good

  • Oke25 on Apr 14, 2012

    you write so dramatic this was just as dramatic as the last one I read :)

  • Booth99 on Jun 2, 2012

    this was good man really

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