The first time we made love was out in the middle of the park.

The first time I  saw you
You hadn’t seen me yet
The first time I spoke to you
You questioned my authority
The first time I saw you blush
When my friends laughed at you for asking
The first time we danced was on roller skates
The first time that I saw your eyes light up
Was when I surprised you at the football game
The first time we kissed
Was later that night when I took you home
The first time I took  you out
Was to church and dinner at my parents
The first time we made love
Was out in the middle of the park
The first time I saw you as my wife
Was when daddy said, “I now pronounce. . .”
The first time I knew I loved you
Is every day I know you

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  • Darla Smith on Jan 29, 2009

    This is a beautiful poem!

  • Alicia Wind on Jan 29, 2009

    U made love in the middle of the park? Really? Whooo

  • lisa on Jan 29, 2009

    beautiful!

  • trishia on Jan 29, 2009

    How delightfully romantic! I find it as a great tribute to the love of your life.

  • lovely honey on Jan 29, 2009

    my logo is good enough ,as a good comment for your first time

    lovely honey \\\\

    please be the first to read all poems of mine tomorrow morning thanks

    lovely honey

  • Palestrya on Apr 17, 2011

    Very sweet!

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