Fish Trapped in The Net

wonder on Nov 18, 2009

Tags: Breeze, fish, glories, Life, net

This is a photograph taken in a beach in Kerala.

Sweet home flowed out of the window

The inhabitants trapped inside

They saw a brand new world out there,

At the end of their joyous ride.

Bursting they are with stories

That will flow out through the net

See how they snuggle

And they never fret.

Have the best of both worlds, you see

Drink life to the lees

Past glories will ever keep blowing friends

Blowing with the breeze.

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drelayaraja on Nov 18, 2009
Very well written.
Teves on Nov 18, 2009
Nice post…
John Watson on Nov 18, 2009
A very good poem backed up by a fantastic image of fish in a net. The blurriness of the image just adds to it. Well done wonder!
ken bultman on Nov 18, 2009
An artiste at work. A poet bursting with stories.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 18, 2009
dats so marvelously written and so true…
Lachu on Nov 18, 2009
very nice one…thanks
abhishek40914 on Nov 18, 2009
nice poem.
svishnugopal on Nov 18, 2009
no wonder you have such a pen name in triond…excellent work
Rinks Desai on Nov 18, 2009
Nice. article
Eunice Tan on Nov 18, 2009
Yeah this poem is magical.
K.Reshma on Nov 18, 2009
Lovely poem
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 18, 2009
good write up
Starpisces on Nov 18, 2009
Another good poem from you, Wonder, that’s wonderful
Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 18, 2009
Absolutely great!
thresiapaulose on Nov 18, 2009
Very nice. I enjoyed it
cutedrishti8 on Nov 18, 2009
A great poem..Madam…Thanks
chitragopi on Nov 18, 2009
Lovely thoughts
Ruby Hawk on Nov 18, 2009
Oh my, I’m afraid those little fish are fretting.
Frances Lawrence on Nov 19, 2009
A magical poem, very well written.
LOVELY HONEY on Nov 19, 2009
ur more wonderful than ur name
lovely
wcmonro on Nov 19, 2009
Beautiful. It’s a pleasure to read your poetry.
My Facebook on Nov 20, 2009
very nice. keep it up.
Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009
I take this piece as a creative poem.
sweetie1 on Nov 24, 2009
beautiful , beautiful, very well written and very nice pic too.
dgraphicrookie on Dec 1, 2009
Very nice poem, Very Touching.
CA Johnson on Dec 6, 2009
This is really good. I love the picture too.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 11, 2009
Beautifully done…..:)
thuanynguyen on Dec 28, 2009
i like the poem, very unique!
lillyrose on Jan 17, 2010
Lovely expressive poem! The photo looks like an oil painting!
swatilohani on Mar 10, 2010
well crafted

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