Fishing

denus on Feb 7, 2009

Tags: ask the fishes, fishing, poem

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Don’t ask me, ask the fishes.

I have a wish.
That someday ill catch more than one fish.
Will it ever happen,
Don’t ask me,
Ask the fishes!

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Betty Carew on Feb 7, 2009
cute poem denus
nutuba on Feb 7, 2009
Fun poem!
Nadir on Feb 7, 2009
Fun Poem. indeed.
seashell66 on Feb 7, 2009
Has a charm to it.
AC Hamilton III on Feb 7, 2009
Cute in a picasso sort of way.
Fornis on Feb 7, 2009
So far you are catching only one fish..
It would be wonderful, if you have written more of it!
Anyway, it is a funny poem!
Debra. on Feb 7, 2009
Lol…
rutherfranc on Feb 7, 2009
fish from an aquarium…
George W Whitehead on Feb 8, 2009
Lovely piece of nonsense, denus. I submitted a poem, one line longer than ‘Fishing’, and it was rejected for being too short!
denus on Feb 8, 2009
that’s crazy! :O
nesita on Feb 8, 2009
funny !
Suppee XX on Feb 8, 2009
A moment of inspiration- Not sure how to take this cute ditty!- Fun.
Lee Altman on Feb 15, 2009
At least you caught one. I just feed them from my hook

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