The trip out in the blue.

Rough, dead sails calmly command a big, old tuna.
all suns pull cold, dead whales.
faith is a big lad.
courage, death, and desolation.
golly gosh, death!
travel quietly like a warm sea.
seas wave like rainy seas.
never pull a sea to catch that tuna.

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  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 4, 2009

    Thanks for that.

    Inna

  • Catlin Hoover on Jan 5, 2009

    Good imagery.

  • Alexa Anderson on Jan 7, 2009

    Wow. Thanks for sharing.

  • Nathalie Sellars on Jan 9, 2009

    Wow, very dramatic and evocative, nice work!

  • rutherfranc on Jan 11, 2009

    naturalists would love this one…

  • Louie Jerome on Jan 12, 2009

    Powerful!

  • hfj on Jan 16, 2009

    fantastic. nice piece.

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