Fishing in Tap Water

drelayaraja on Nov 8, 2009

Tags: betrayed, cater, elayaraja, fishing, friend, love, Tap water

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Betrayed…

FISHING IN TAP WATER

To satisfy you , I was there to cater,

How come I know? My dreams would shatter,

I was ever thinking, I could haul it later,

Can’t you say my world? I was fishing in tap water!

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Jane Benitez on Nov 8, 2009
Clever usage of words. Very well done!
aunslaught on Nov 21, 2009
Now THIS one is VERY poetic.. Your best one (in my opinion)
dragon on Nov 22, 2009
Great metaphor.
T. S. Lewis on Feb 23, 2010
This is really deep. The meaning will surface slowly
Raj the Tora on Nov 2, 2010
This matter
is greater
Than Gator
In Crator

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