To be enamored, sometimes, is like being a fish that bites the hook.

Your beauty is like a worm

that enduring one twists

in the edge of a metallic hook,

and my eyes are like a fish

that it open finds out its mouth

and it bites voracious the bait,

soon to die asphyxiated

between useless jumps

in order to leave the disappointment

and to return to swim

in safe waters of the solitude.

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