Describing love with the five senses.

I see you enter through the door,

your smile brightens up the room.

Every time you come to visit me,

you always chase away the gloom.

 

I hear the sound of your voice,

whispering seductively in my ear.

Your soft words of undying love,

vanquishes all my doubt and fear.

 

I taste your sweet burning kiss,

as your luscious lips cover mine.

I soon begin to feel intoxicated,

your kiss tastes like fine wine.

 

I love the scent of your cologne,

its aroma leaves my senses reeling.

I become lightheaded and dizzy,

that is such a delightful feeling.

 

I feel your gentle loving touch,

as your fingers caress my skin.

The stroke of your soft fingertips,

ignites my passion once again.

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Comments (16)
  • Atanacio on Jan 9, 2010

    Clever, this was well written

  • Bijoy Keyar on Jan 9, 2010

    wow…amazing..

  • Jamie Myles on Jan 9, 2010

    Love it! Very nice.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 9, 2010

    beautiful poem

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 9, 2010

    Very nice.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • deep blue on Jan 9, 2010

    A passionate poetry. Well done.

  • Valerie Curtiss on Jan 9, 2010

    Very nicely put.

  • alc on Jan 9, 2010

    Thanks for another brilliant share!

  • ken bultman on Jan 9, 2010

    These are starting to sound alike.

  • Anamika S on Jan 10, 2010

    Very nice. I guess all lovers feel the same way.

  • mdartist on Jan 10, 2010

    Once again, smooth passionate poem beautifuly expressed. Your work is really grand.

  • The Last Ogre on Jan 10, 2010

    Beautiful write.

  • Frederick Zammit on Jan 10, 2010

    Lovley

  • Steven West on Jan 10, 2010

    Very passionate and sensual Well done.

  • Yvonne K on Jan 11, 2010

    applause

  • CutestPrincess on Jan 12, 2010

    lovely poem…

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