Haiku – reflection.
When the flame had goneWe searched across empty fieldsSadly wandering
Glad to see a new beautiful one. Thanks for sharing.
Martin, Perhaps it’s because I’ve been immersed in prehistory lately, but as I read this perceptive haiku, I thought of ancient peoples struggling to understand the natural world and wondering about the sun and where “the flame had gone”.
it made me pause…and think!
Wonderful. : )
Lost love sad
like the title most..
Really good haiku.
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