Can’t touch me.

You wish you could,

You know you should,

Try and touch me,

Catch the flames.

Turn to dust and know my name.

Dangerous it is, that you know.

But touch the flames,

And get burnt and black,

Like an insect fly to the light

Oh, it is so bright,

Tempted to touch?

Catch the flames.

Turn to dust and know my name.

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Comments (9)
  • S M Blomker on May 19, 2009

    very nice poem

  • Darla Cooke on May 19, 2009

    Very nice!

  • STEVE666 on May 19, 2009

    It reads well, Kaavs, but I’m a bit lost with this one.

  • lh on May 19, 2009

    i have experienced

  • George W Whitehead on May 19, 2009

    Nice one, Kaavs.

  • revivor on May 20, 2009

    get this one to music!!
    thanks – revivor

  • swatilohani on May 20, 2009

    excellent

  • California Dreamer on May 21, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Princess Dre on May 25, 2009

    nice read.. has a swing to it..

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