Flash Flood!

Fresh Writing on Sep 25, 2009

Tags: blood, Flash flood, flood, fresh, Fresh Writing, nature

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Bang it’s here…bang it’s gone.

A little bit of poetry that’d been on my mind:

Lines keep coming through like some kind of flash flood

Immaculate intensity been seen as brightly as fresh blood

It doesn’t stop.

This count rolls like the seconds of time

Where I conclude this piece with a quick and simply rhyme.

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Comments (6)

Sexyhood03 on Sep 25, 2009
Not trying to be funny or rude but check your dictionary more and it should be longer
thestickman on Sep 25, 2009
-Thought it was about the flood down south… whew! Like, -don’t bother coming to MY house, MY house is coming to YOU!
Fresh Writing on Oct 26, 2009
Yeah thanks sexy…XD That’s Triond’s fault, not mine.
V rank on Jan 7, 2010
i appreciate the simplicity of this write…
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 14, 2010
That’s awesome to have your work just flowing out of you so effortlessly, write it down keep it going and work towards publishing a book.
K Kristie on Feb 14, 2010
Nice rhymes.

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